1. I really liked how my unnamed person, we'll call her Boquisha, used a lot of detail in her thinking process in we entries. She also had a good description of herself growing as she learned how to balance her work and overcome challenges.
2. Boquisha sometimes used language that was too casual in her entries. I think she also could have added more research about already created duct tape art.
3. I would really like to borrow her use of lists. Obviously we already talked about it in class but she had some good examples of lists with a lot of content and meaning. I would also like to use Boquisha's honest description of her thoughts and how she grew as a person. I think sometimes I can sound a bit like the diary of a cat.
XDXP GG
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